Critic #poetry

All I see
Is the eye is too big
The arm is too long

All I see
Are the flaws
I can never see the uncontested beauty

All I see
Are wasted hours
A vain attempt to prove artistic prowess
Guess that is just the critic in me

All you see
Is that the light is just right
The pose is just so

All you see
Is something no one else could create
The uncontested beauty
Something that moves you to heartbreak

All you see
Is my soul in each creation
A stunning interpretation
Of emotional display
Guess that is just the critic in you


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